Thursday, February 24, 2005

Bad poetry I wrote as a teenager, Volume II

I'll be on a train up to Saratoga tomorrow, hopefully giddy from a spectacular date with Rock Star. That means you get your bad poetry a little early this week.

This particular work is untitled. I wrote it after my first breakup with my first long-term boyfriend, Satan.

I wrote for you a love song
But the words got lost in the wind
I built for you a castle
But you wouldn't let me in
I cried for you an ocean
But it soon dried up with the sun
I painted you a rainbow
But the colors melted into one
I tried to say I love you
But I couldn't find the words
I begged you not to leave me
But my voice was never heard


If you missed Volume I, you can read it here.

And for a sneak preview of next week's bad poetry…

Curly: It's really not that bad.

Me: Oh. It is.

Curly: Girl, I MUST dig mine out. I can out-cheese you.

Me: I have an atrocious sonnet for next week.

Curly: Atrocious sonnet = my favorite phrase of the day.

Me: I actually used the word mem'ries.

Curly: Oh no you didn't!

Me: Oh yes I did!